Description: For our writing lesson this morning, we had to write a ‘Great Beginning’. The purpose of our task was to create an eye catching paragraph using your writing for eg; Vocabulary, Organisation and such more. Using these will accomplish your goals.
Hanging the Telephones
The echo of blood splattering against the thin walls was terrifying. It was quiet but yet the silence was so loud as you could hear the bullets pierced through bodies like jello. Seeing the person left me in fear because of their Intimidating presence. Some sounds were unheard of, as you could hear the pain in their voice as they shrieked. We were held for as many days as I could remember, with little food to ration and with no service.