Tag: Writing

Writing W4 T4

Description: For our writing lesson this morning, we had to write a ‘Great Beginning’. The purpose of our task was to create an eye catching paragraph using your writing for eg; Vocabulary, Organisation and such more. Using these will accomplish your goals.

 

Hanging the Telephones

The echo of blood splattering against the thin walls was terrifying. It was quiet but yet the silence was so loud as you could hear the bullets pierced through bodies like jello. Seeing the person left me in fear because of their Intimidating presence. Some sounds were unheard of, as you could hear the pain in their voice as they shrieked. We were held for as many days as I could remember, with little food to ration and with no service.

Reflection

Task description: Mrs Victor gave us a task were we could write down what went good or bad or what could’ve of been executed better. I reflected on how I felt when we performed our items and how our work station could be better. The whole objective is to help understand what we could do better in the future. Maybe you should try this technique to help you as well!

Camp thank you letter

Task description: You were meant to write a letter to someone that used there free time to come to camp.

 

                                                                                                                                                                                                       Dear Mr Pete,

I want to thank you for taking your time to hang out with Glen Taylor and supporting the staff members and team tui students. I would like to say thank you for using your free time to come to Camp Bentzon and help with everything. You have a part in a Memory that will last as long as my last breath.

You always made my week much better at camp. You were so kind because you were always willing to help. It was a fun and new experience being away from my parents. You even saved two students that were trapped in the cabins and saved them with your handy dandy tool kit! You made my friends and I die of laughter with your funny and talented impressions. 

My favourite highlight would probably be orienting because we worked as a team finding each clue. As we explored Lesley made me laugh because of the amount of times she slipped going down the steep mountains.

I think I could’ve made more friends over the week. My goal is to be a role model for my younger pairs and be an inspiration in the future. I want to inspire students that no matter how old you are you can still succeed in your dreams. I want to make a great impact on the world and show how capable I am. My beliefs are to always respect everyone and be a gentlemen to ALL women.

Your Honoured Student, 

Spencer 

 

My Recount

Task Description: This week task was to write a recount on a special event. I decided to write the time I went down to whakatane for my rugby comp. Hope you enjoy reading my hardworking recount.

 

Competition Whakatane

 

During the last week of term three my family and I went to Whakatane for my ARL (Auckland Rugby League) Competition. 

 

The three hour drive was so long and boring I fell asleep snoring until we got to our destination. I was so excited it felt like a famous VIP sprinting into a new flashy marae. I acknowledge the men and women that were in the picture frames, even though it was not my marae I still respected the people proudly with mana.  Food was provided for everyone for breakfast, lunch and dinner we had lasagna, BBQ, Pizza and Chips! 

 

On the first day of the competition I was pumped full of adrenaline, I could say the same thing for my teammate/friends. Knowing that we were versus one of the best teams right now in the MNZL (Maori New Zealand League) my teammates lost hope. Our first being nervous and being afraid to lose we still tried our best and lost by a little bit. The next games were intense thinking if we were going to lose but we tried with great power and will to stride forward.

Zoo Debate

Task description: This week was to write persuasive writing and to read a book called zoo debate and other articles.

Should we have zoos? 

Today’s Zoos are very different from before. They are now more animals and no longer live in cages. In my opinion I think zoos should be banned because they are destroying animals’ circle of life and they have to hurt the animals so they can stay in their enclosures. They cut flamingos wings so they cannot escape their enclosures. The main reason why I think zoos are bad is that if they get released into the wild they will not know what to do because they are relying on zookeepers. Another reason is you can learn much on YouTube or any other social media. You can find facts or learn something about animals in newspapers, articles and google. In conclusion that is why I am against zoos and they should release the animals into the wild.

 

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